{when you were half asleep}

suspended in air.
the sky is not so blue
now I am inside

dangling
like a dismissed child
a discarded red ribbon

delicate
china fingers grip the coarse edge
let loose, a spring of beautiful red

suspended, then, fall.

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2 thoughts on “{when you were half asleep}

  1. Jingle says:

    happy 2011…
    lovely word flow,
    magical writing…

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