#103

I always hate
how fast the light fades
from a January
crystal blue
lights in the sky
galaxies hiding
just out of sight
along the peripheral lake
of clear vision
orange and black spotted koi

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2 thoughts on “#103

  1. You number, just like I do! :)

    I really like the sound of this piece. What brought me here, though, was your piece “mon finale” that I read in my feed, but couldn’t find here to comment on. I absolutely loved it – it reads beautifully and the ending is wonderful. Nicely done.

    • lukewater says:

      Thank you so much! mon finale should be up to read :)
      the three poems, #101, 102 &103 are actually the only ones I’ve ever numbered, they felt like a series, and sometimes I just would rather they have no names :D

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